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Post by Serenoli on Sept 21, 2007 16:43:10 GMT
Nice post Angmar for Hyarion. And Duilin - I think you did an excellent job with the exposition, and with handling such a lot of characters at once - although there were a couple of grammatical mistakes, which I suppose had something to do with your limited internet time.
I also have a few posts planned for the future, including a trip North for our beloved Princess Odie, but I'm waiting on Elfhild for that one. Meanwhile, RL is catching up to me as well - my two-month break is almost over, and I'm due to start regular classes by Sunday; but I think my output should be increased by it - I am always lazier and more prone to procrastinate on my writing when I have no other work to do.
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Post by Gordis on Sept 21, 2007 19:14:56 GMT
Angmar et al., placeholder #183 is filled   Agannalo meets Gelireth  OWW! Angmar, please read and correct. I have left the previous placehioder #182 empty for you, but you can move my post into this one if you wish to post the continuation and not the end of the interview.
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Post by Rian on Sept 21, 2007 19:34:11 GMT
Wow, three really good posts! Poor Agannalo - he just can't get a break, can he?!  I think you described his inner conflict/frustration very well, Gordis, and how one can't even look long at the Captain's ladies. And Angmar's post makes you wonder what's up for Hyarion ... And Duilin, I really liked that whole idea of how they all look good, but for some, the looks don't match the rest of them! Serenoli, I'm glad you've got some posts up your sleeve and predict you'll be posting more - your posts are really inventive and lively  We just need our wonderful frog lady to hop over here soon and start posting!! and Val's and Elfhild's RL loads to lighten up  |
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Post by Witch-king of Angmar on Sept 21, 2007 20:09:27 GMT
Duilin, I am glad to see you were able to continue posting here. Your writing is an asset. Angmar et al., placeholder #183 is filled Agannalo meets Gelireth OWW! Angmar, please read and correct. I have left the previous placehioder #182 empty for you, but you can move my post into this one if you wish to post the continuation and not the end of the interview. Gordis, His Majesty will have to keep a vigilant eye upon that pair. ;D I don't think his designs upon her are altogether platonic. I thoroughly enjoyed the post. There was light shed upon "Morgul Blade" safety practices. ;D I have corrected the few minor errors. There weren't many. Rian, I, too, would like to see the frog lady come back. She has been missed. |
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Post by Rian on Sept 21, 2007 20:45:11 GMT
And I've added a post from A&T to join the post party (I hope Gordis doesn't mind my character's insult to her character ... ) |
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Post by Eärniel on Sept 21, 2007 22:27:47 GMT
Rian, I, too, would like to see the frog lady come back. She has been missed. She has been missing the writing with you guys too. But you guys have been doing marvelously so far, the variance and originality of all those little plot lines makes absolute great reading. When I have time again I should try and increase my input in the story as well. I'm counting the days until the work has finished, the stuff has been moved and the shop can reopen. Just two more weeks, and then I finally can wear something else than old work clothes again, finally get a Sunday off after seven (then nine) full work-weeks, finally can get back into role playing and hopefully never have to work with frustrating construction workers again. Although, it has sometimes been rather amusing to see the look on the face of all these guys when I pass by carrying heavy material or am busy screwing doors back in place. Clearly women are vastly underrepresented in the construction world... |
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Post by Rian on Sept 21, 2007 23:07:03 GMT
But you guys have been doing marvelously so far, the variance and originality of all those little plot lines makes absolute great reading. [whisper]OK, guys, let's start writing really bad so she'll go crazy and come back and show us how it's done! [/whisper] EDIT - I added a bit more to the A&T post ... |
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Post by Gordis on Sept 22, 2007 6:24:01 GMT
Very nice post, Rian, I liked the jokes and the interaction with the horse. I have one suggestion - to change the date of the post from "November 8, 1347, sunset – eight leagues west of the Last Bridge to " November 9, evening - 16 leagues west of the Last Bridge" This way we show that Gimilbeth's caravan is indeed moving, and then your post won't be out of the current time sequence, as we are already on the 9. Is it OK? |
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Post by Gordis on Sept 22, 2007 6:43:27 GMT
Gordis, His Majesty will have to keep a vigilant eye upon that pair. ;D I don't think his designs upon her are altogether platonic. I thoroughly enjoyed the post. There was light shed upon "Morgul Blade" safety practices. ;D I have corrected the few minor errors. There weren't many. , thank you for the corrections. Agannalo won't try anything with Gelireth - even if sorely tempted. He doesn't want to be thrown out of the fortress - or worse. But the lady is curious... Not enamored or something, just thrilled. Curiosity killed the cat...  After all she has little to occupy herself while the King is busy - such boredom in those medieval castles! Trying to "socialize" a shy young relative could be entertaining. And Agannalo will play St. Francis for once. ;D As for "safety pactices", I have included this basing on Glorfindel's advice to Aragorn not to touch the Morgul knife's hilt and wrap it in something. Now it is clear that hearing Hyarion's tale in full, Alassar knows exactly what has happened to Elina - and he will undoubtedly report this to the King. Agannalo has told his captain nothing about it, and now the nazgul is enjoying his hashish-induced bliss. So the King will have to handle the situation himself. By the way, Angmar, may I ask for an edit in your Hyarion post #193? "Nay," Alassar's expression was unreadable, " he is still resting after the journey, but I am sure if something is not in order, we will be hearing from Lord Silmadan soon enough." After eating all these hashish pills he is bound to sleep for a few days, unless kicked hard by the Captain ;D |
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Post by Witch-king of Angmar on Sept 23, 2007 8:57:21 GMT
Now it is clear that hearing Hyarion's tale in full, Alassar knows exactly what has happened to Elina - and he will undoubtedly report this to the King. Agannalo has told his captain nothing about it, and now the nazgul is enjoying his hashish-induced bliss. So the King will have to handle the situation himself. Gordis, yes, Alassar has just now related this information to the king, and a little bit more besides. I will make the edit. |
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Agannalo meets Gelireth 
OWW!
I think you described his inner conflict/frustration very well, Gordis, and how one can't even look long at the Captain's ladies.
After all she has little to occupy herself while the King is busy - such boredom in those medieval castles! Trying to "socialize" a shy young relative could be entertaining. And Agannalo will play St. Francis for once. ;D