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Post by Eärniel on Apr 18, 2008 21:30:30 GMT
I've only now looked at those sites on which the story is posted so far. Looks spiffy.  But I was thinking, Runnings is clearly labelled in the title as part one, but Intrigues and Sorcery is not. Shouldn't it be better to add 'Shadow over Rhudaur, part two'? Just in case to make clear that they belong together. |
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Post by Gordis on Apr 18, 2008 22:30:18 GMT
Right. Thanks, Earniel.
I have corrected that.
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Post by Eärniel on Apr 18, 2008 23:35:25 GMT
Yeah, sorry to be nitpicking like that. It seems the only times I suggest corrections, it's always these tiny details.  |
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Post by Gordis on Apr 19, 2008 8:05:58 GMT
I now remember why I have not written "Shadow II" from the start. I thought it better to make people believe it was a new story to get them to start reading. If they are hooked, then they will check Shadow I anyway. A title like "something part II" is discouraging... But now when it is almost complete, it is high time to change the title. I might repeat the same trick with "Perilous Journeys" ;D  |
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Post by Gordis on Apr 27, 2008 16:26:38 GMT
A new review: Title: Chapter 25. The Witch-King’s Hunt
Reviewer: Formegil
Very dramatic, this chapter. Somehow hunting dangerous beasts fits very well to the Witch-King (quite logical that he would enjoy the feeling of danger and power). I will look forward to the next part. I hope it will come soon.Angmar, I think it would be better if you reply to it yourself . You can either post your reply here for me to repost on the site, or you can post it directly there, logging in as NKW (password the same as for "scribe" on our site). www.lotrfanfiction.com/reviews.php?type=ST&item=10522&PHPSESSID=a263b16dce90ad15382a0e64663b04d1 |
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Post by Witch-king of Angmar on Apr 28, 2008 1:12:37 GMT
Gordis, I don't know the password for the Scribe account, so here is my reply:
The King of Angmar would have been an impressive ruler, always hungry for power, and perhaps enjoying staying on the edge of danger. He would be the sort of man whom his subjects would want to follow, and one whom the kings of Cardolan, Arthedain and Rhudaur would fear. He has always been a character whom I have enjoyed roleplaying or writing about. Thank you, Formegil, for reviewing.
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Post by Gordis on Apr 28, 2008 4:41:07 GMT
Thanks, Angmar, I am posting your reply right away. |
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Post by Witch-king of Angmar on Apr 28, 2008 8:00:51 GMT
Gordis, thank you.
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Post by Rian on Apr 28, 2008 18:33:46 GMT
wahh, no one likes my characters - I'm going to kill them all off!!!!! Let's see .. a nassssty bout of elven flu, maybe?
(this is actually just a test post - got a new computer and am trying to set it up)
edit- finally got the time right, at least ...
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Post by Serenoli on May 8, 2008 0:34:21 GMT
Rian  if there is no such thing as Human flu, how can there be Elven flu? |
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But I was thinking, Runnings is clearly labelled in the title as part one, but Intrigues and Sorcery is not. Shouldn't it be better to add 'Shadow over Rhudaur, part two'? Just in case to make clear that they belong together. 
if there is no such thing as Human flu, how can there be Elven flu?